Lady Sydney

Mkay. Thanks, Liz! :D I will work on that. ^_^

Hmm... now that I've reread this, it does seem a little dark, heavy, and Dictionary-ish. I'll try to keep that in mind when I write the other four. I was ...

Thanks, Jabbs. Umm... yeah, I don't know what the deal is with my backwards punctuation. I've been trying to fix it, but everytime it IS fixed, something goes spazzy on ...

Many thanks, Aedomir! :D Hmm... I sound like a poet, huh? Cool. ^_^ I never thought of that. (Not sarcasm, mind you) I guess I can say that I'm thrilled ...

Many, many thanks for your comments! :D I guess that means there was nothing I needed to work on or improve, hm. :wink: Nah, just kidding. There's always room to ...

lol! Thanks. ^_^ I'm very pleased that I violated your comfort zone. And thanks a bunch for your crit! I'm glad you enjoyed reading. =) Royally, ~ * Lady Sydney ...

Thanks for your inputs and opinions, guys! You are my motivation. ^_^ Royally, ~ * Lady Sydney * ~

Many many thanks, all! I'm delighted that you like this so much. I'll send out PM's once I've updated. ^.^ Royally, ~ * Lady Sydney * ~

*blushes* Aww. Thanks so much! ^_^ I'm glad you love it so much. And don't worry about the whole inserting quotes thing, you're new so it's cool. You'll get it ...

Thanks a bunch, aedomir! ^_^ I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it and think that I am a "brilliant poet". I've been reading many of the other poems on here by ...

Smiling wide, “I truly am, doubtlessly, the most fairest of them all. ^ Agreeing completely with what you said about that line! You have no idea how many times I've ...

Ah yes! First critique, at last! lol Thank you so much for your input on what you liked and what you thought could be changed. I was going to switch ...

I didn't say rhyme scheme. I said rhythm... as in the beat/tempo? I'm not sure what the correct term is. I know that it's free verse, I just couldn't figure ...

Lol. Aww, that's cute! ^_^ Congrats to Mr. and Mrs. Oink! Nice idea, Matt. ~*Syd*~

Thanks bunches, Mark! Character development was one the hardest things for me to work on in this, so hearing that makes me feel accomplished. ^_^ Thanks again! ~*Syd*~